Very good. But, unless I miss my guess, you should say something about your family, too.
非常好,但是我除非我想错了,不然你应该谈谈你的家庭。
After having been wounded towards the end of the war, he had been sent to hospital and was separated from his unit.
战争即将结束时,他负伤被送进医院,并与部队失去联系。